Title: Future Colleges
Client/Sponsor: Atmospheric Science
Length: 30 seconds
Air Dates: unknown
Known to many in the Atmospheric Science world is a degree program that gives students the opportunity to experience weather as it happens. With top professionals in their individual fields of study, Lyndon Atmospheric Science professors offer a practical approach to an otherwise non-practical education. Lyndon, a Vermont state college. Education that is more than a classroom.
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This is much shorter than 30 seconds.
ReplyDeleteStart your ad with something punchy, like "Study weather -- as it happens."
It's illogical to say "With top professionals... Lyndon professors offer." You mean to say the professors are the top professionals, yes?
The phrase "an otherwise non-practical education" is unclear. I can't tell whether you're being humorous or calling meteorology impractical (something your client will not agree with).
The tagline is great: Education that is more than a classroom.
Take another stab at this before you submit it to the client. I'll be happy to look at it again.